Ok, the art is obviously amazing. There's really not much you could do to improve it.
However, this animation's writing really falls short. It's so slow! Too much standing around, waiting for transitions to finish. Pauses in between dialogue are painful.
Work on improving the pacing. Keep things moving so we stay interested.
The dubstep at the end was awesome, though.
Well done. Story seemed a little simple, but the animation was excellent.
Also, Master Roshi as Sheriff Bot?
Pretty epic. Also, congrats on using "their" and "they're" correctly. you don't see that very often any more.
I like grammar :D
It's not often that someone submits something so truly meaningful and sincere to Newgrounds. Thank you.
the loading screen chick is pooping out her vagina.
negative, that poo is coming from a bum, you obviously have not seen poop crowning.
that gunshot scared the shit outta me. had the surround sound all cranked up. funny.
Very funny, and some of the animation and drawings are really quite good. WHAT IS THAT SONG!?
Best goddamn thing on newgrounds. Period. You are amazing. I was grimacing and laughing. Scared and interested. No multimillion dollar production could ever pull me in like this short trilogy did.
haha that was funny.. i lol'd very good timing
I love you
you are so great. i want to make sweet love to you nonstop for days and days, then break for water and food, then continue.
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