Ok, the art is obviously amazing. There's really not much you could do to improve it.
However, this animation's writing really falls short. It's so slow! Too much standing around, waiting for transitions to finish. Pauses in between dialogue are painful.
Work on improving the pacing. Keep things moving so we stay interested.
The dubstep at the end was awesome, though.
Well done. Story seemed a little simple, but the animation was excellent.
Also, Master Roshi as Sheriff Bot?
Pretty epic. Also, congrats on using "their" and "they're" correctly. you don't see that very often any more.
I like grammar :D
Really awesome in every way except for the spawns. So many deaths were the result of spawning right on top of someone.
Doodle Jump much? I'm guessing you have the app.
Not too original, but not completely awful or anything.
I would suggest adding the ability to rotate stuff, and also to adjust layers, as in what item shows up on top. Also, maybe some different backgrounds or music, as well as the option to mute the music.
yeah. you can rotate.
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